Rule: do not open topics that you do not want to discuss in the article. Always avoid irrelevant or trivial topics.

Now this family is in trouble. They had a motorboat, the main source of their income, but it sank a couple of days ago. They had a dozen head of cattle, most of which have died. They had an old building, which they built about fifty years ago. a long time indeed; my grandfather was very young then but they also lost it during the liberation war. How sad it is to see good people in danger!

In the above passage, the bold part does not match the rest of the paragraph. In other words, it is totally irrelevant. The inclusion of such expressions or sentences in any paragraph is considered a great weakness on the part of the writer. Sometimes even grammatical defects in writing are overlooked, but such an anomaly destroys the Unit of paragraphs

Rule: Don’t bundle your sentences with too many verbs and verbals (non-finite verbs) so that the meaning is indirect and they look awkward. Use abbreviated, direct verbs or verb phrases. Don’t use passive forms of verbs unnecessarily.

Verbose: That accident got me thinking.

Concise: That accident got me thinking.

Verbose: They forced him to agree to stop writing.

Concise: They forced him to stop writing.

Verbose: This plan is considered likely to help cover past losses.

Concise: This plan is likely to help cover past losses.

Verbose: It’s going to mean that no one will bear to get the money back.

Concise: It means no one will get the money back.

Wordy: Sabuj-la Bipu Sona say what Nishat Sultana Rimu He doesn’t deserve to receive such a large salary.

Concise: Sabuj-la Bipu Sona say what Nishat Sultana Rimu He doesn’t deserve such a big salary.

Wordy: Sabuj – the Bipu Sona you must do the work of making it possible to help them quit smoking.

Concise: Sabuj- el Bipu Sona You should help them quit smoking.

Rule: Avoid redundancy.

In English, people often make such mistakes. “Back”, for example, means “to return”, so it is redundant to say or write:

Return early.

The correct way will be

Return early

Prayed, To return early.

Here are some more examples of redundancy.

Redundant: Tea sense of the word “substitute” medium “not genuine”

Standard: Tea sense of the word “substitute” it is “not genuine”

Prayed, The word “substitute” medium “not genuine”

Redundant: Tea two twins they are playing.

Standard: Tea Twins they are playing.

Redundant: Us advanced/continued/advanced forward.

Standard: Us advanced.

Prayed, Us went forward

Redundant: the water is More than enough for production.

Standard: the water is More than enough for production.

Redundant: we go join the two ends of the rope together.

Standard: we go join the two ends of the rope.

Redundant: Nishat Sultana Rimu has Returned in Sabuj – the Bipu Sona life.

Standard: Nishat Sultana Rimu has to return in Sabuj – the Bipu Sona life.

Gold, Nishat Sultana Rimu has Returned in Sabuj – the Bipu Sona life.

Redundant: repeat again what did you say.

Standard: Repeat what did you say.

Redundant: This process is the responsibility of management. new innovation.

Standard: This process is the responsibility of management. innovation.

(Goal “new invention” is a standard expression)

Redundant: These two photos are same identical.

Standard: These two photos are same/identical.

Redundant: Tea reason he died is because drank a poisonous liquid.

Standard: Tea reason he died is that drank a poisonous liquid.

Likewise, “the time when” and “the place where” are redundant expressions.